Kia ora Charlie, I like your blog post, And i see that the audience was Me. :) I really liked your poem it was a really relaxing poem But next time could you please make the poem bigger and change the font to make it easier to see and read.I still really liked it
Kia ora. I am Sreesha from St Mary’s School. This shined because your poem rymed. My favourite paragraph is the middle one. Maybe next time you could make the first paragraph more rymed. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora Charlie,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post,
And i see that the audience was Me. :)
I really liked your poem it was a really relaxing poem
But next time could you please make the poem bigger and change the font to make it easier to see and read.I still really liked it
From Mia
Kia ora. I am Sreesha from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteThis shined because your poem rymed.
My favourite paragraph is the middle one.
Maybe next time you could make the first paragraph more rymed.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Sreesha